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|"A Long Night" - Satisfying & Tastefully written Honeymoon Night||Adult||4.6/5||11||1||Yes||6910|
Dear Reader - I wrote this, having finished the Twilight Saga and found Breaking Dawn somewhat lacking in... details... when it came to the highly anticipated honeymoon! What an anticlimax! So after reading the books another dozen times and still not being satisfied, I wrote it, as I saw it in my mind and made it as true to the original characters as I could. Finally, I could see Edward and Bella make love on their first night at Isle Esme!
I'm not a writer. I've never written anything before, but I am considering flexing my creative muscles on a piece of my own fiction as a result of enjoying this project immensely and I would love to know if you enjoy reading this, as much as (or more than) I enjoyed writing it.
Let me know if I should finish the story - trust me, I have plenty of ammo having spent a solid week of 2am starts concocting my not-so-pure plans for Edward... :D
Even though writing in the first person comes somewhat naturally, especially having read the books so many times and being bathed in this point of view, it was quite difficult to allow the story to flow with enough description to satisfy without babbling I, I, I, he, he, he! Hopefully, I managed to write something that isn't repetitive and flows well enough for you to enjoy the moment.
I have included a few lines from the preceding story line in Breaking Dawn, so you know where I've picked up from (as if you don't already know...)
Enjoy! - Angela