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Unlucky, or Lucky?

Young Amanda has had the worst day ever. It only gets worse when she meets a blood thirsty vampire who tricks her into going deep into the woods with him. Though his meal was inturrupted and she was not finished off, what will happen to her now? Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!


1. worst day ever

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It was raining again, as usual, and the dark clouds seemed to hang over only me. Just to match my mood. Today was an awful day. It all started the same, I got up, got dressed and got ready for school. Sadly, it all when downhill from there. I missed my bus, so I had to walk through the rain, getting drenched! Then, I was late for school, so I couldn't take my Geometry final and I had to remake it up after school. Left my lunch at home and had no money so I was starving! It was pretty much my worst day ever.

I was walking home from school when I heard the most beautiful voice in the world. It seemed to be calling me, so I turned around. There stood, the most gorgeous figure I had ever seen! He had dark brown hair with a soft curl and white, pale skin. He was simply dressed but it seemed as though he just walked out of a magazine add. The only downside to his Godly appearance was his eyes. A dark red that entranced me in his gaze.

"Hello," he said, "Amanda, Right? I noticed that your backpack looks a little too heavy for you and I was wondering if you would like me to help you out?"

Actually, my bag was fine, it wasn't heavy at all. I looked down at my bag as my light blonde hair draped over my face. I saw his hands ball up into tight fists and I thought of just walking away. But I had no way of denying this guy so I agreed, slowly nodding, and handed it over to him. He smiled showing a perfect row of white gleaming teeth and started walking. I quickly turned and matched his pace and soon we were walking together down the dark winedy road that led to my neighborhood.

Right when I was about to turn down my road, he stopped. "What's the matter?" I asked him, "Do you need to go? I can take bag back if you would like." I didn't want to seem rude, especially to this hunk of gorgeous.

"No," he smiled, "Actually I was hoping you could help me out. You see, I also live near here, and I remember loosing something in that grove of trees over there, can you help me find it?" he asked leaning in and whispering softly in my ear. I couldn't even talk. I just nodded and turned around heading into the woods. I didn't even know what I was looking for, I just wanted to do whatever he asked. I felt a cool hand on my back and noticed he was right behind me, I hadn't even heard him move. Slowly I saw out of the corner of my eye his mouth reach down to my neck as I thought he was going to give me a kiss.

I was wrong. It was not a kiss, but a bite. He opened his mouth and bit down hard on my neck. Strangely enough, it didn't hurt. At least the pain didn't reach my brain. All I could think about was how strange and crazy a day I was having. I tried to step away, but I realized his arms were wrapped around my waist. I didn't know what to do, I couldn't scream out. I lost my footing and fell into his arms. My eyelids became heavy as I sealed them shut. Forever, I thought.

All of a sudden I heard a loud gasp and a noise that resembled two boulders crashing into each other.

"Jared!" I heard a soft female voice call out, "What are you doing? You know we have changed our ways, this isn't what we want to be." I had no idea what this lady was talking about, but I knew that she was not pleased that this guy was drinking my blood. Their voices became quieter and quieter until I heard no more. I felt a hot fire begin to build inside of me as I fell into a blanket of pain.