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Alices Vision

When the Cullen's left, Bella became dead to the world. But what if Alices has a vision of Bella's new life and the end of it. over 9500+ read so start reviewing. NEW CHAPTER UP 28/1/12

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2. the letter

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I was ripped from my vision and fell the floor hard.

It was too late; I knew I wouldn’t get there in time.

“EDWARD” I yelled as I dry sobbed “EDWARD”

Before I knew it, I had the whole family had surrounding me and Jasper was trying to hold me up but my legs wouldn’t support my wieght.

I looked at Edward in the eyes and glared. “WHAT DID YOU TELL HER WHEN YOU LEFT”

He looked back up at me in shock, trying to read my mind but I was blocking him

“I…I don’t understand”

“We are going back to Forks now” I growled

“NO” he shouted

I pulled myself up and slammed him into the wall “what ever you said to her has made her…” I froze, the pain that I felt coming off her was unbearable “oh I am not even going to give you the remorse for the knowing what you did to her” I growled releasing him “we are going now”

“What did you see Alice” Carlisle stepped forward, his voice was calm but his face conveyed worry.

“You will find out when we get there”

I ran out of the house before anyone could ask anymore questions.


The flight was long, I had to try keep Edward out of my head as I mourned Bella, what had Edward told her to make her hurt so much, to make her carve up her body.


I was standing outside Bella’s house with Jasper and Emmet, Edward had refused to come, Esme and Carlisle wanted to check out the house and Rosalie was sitting in the car mumbling about her beauty…

I was too afraid to knock; I didn’t want to believe that Bella was dead. I just couldn’t.

“Jasper” I whispered “you may want to stay out here”

“Why” he questioned

“What I saw…” I paused, I couldn’t put into words “what I saw contained a lot of blood…a lot if it”

“You mean”

“I believe so”

“I won’t leave you to deal with this yourself. Bella was apart of the family, none of this would happen of I hadn’t attacked her on her birthday”

“Jasper, none of this is your fault, Bella would have forgiven you in a heartbeat and you know it” I couldn’t believe that Jasper thought he was the blame for all this.

“Are we going to do this?” Emmet’s asked, eyeing the house worriedly after hearing what i told Jasper.

I knew this had to be done; I walked up the rest of the way to the door and knocked

It wasn’t long before a tired and worn out looking Charlie answered the door; he took one look at us and slammed the door shut. I could hear him yelling and throwing things around the house for a while before opening the door again “What do you want?” he asked, the venom in his voice shocked me.

“We are here about Bella” I said sadly “Charlie we are really sorry”

“Your sorry” he yelled “your family…your brother destroyed by baby girl”

“I’m so sorry Charlie” I was trying hard not to cry, but I was losing “if I knew this would happen I wouldn’t have left”

“You don’t get to be sorry, none of you do” he yelled again “because of you my daughter has to live the rest--”

“Did you say live?” I asked, hope filling me.

“If you call living in that place living” he snarled “she will never have a life, never go to college, never get married never have children and its all you and your rotten families fault, its only because I love Bella that I am even considering giving you this letter”

“What letter?” I questioned scared “what happened?”

“What happened, are you joking? When you left you destroyed my daughter, everything she once loved didn’t matter to her anymore, the light left her eyes” he snarled at me again before throwing a letter at me and slamming the door shut.

I fell to the floor and cried dry tears. I felt Jasper pick me up and carry me back to the car, Rosalie was now looking at us with wide eyes

“What did Edward do to her” she asked

“I ...I plan on … finding ou…out” I said in between sobs

Emmet got into the drivers seat and drove to our old home “Sweetie, we have to read the letter” Jasper said trying to pry the letter out of my hands but I turned and snarled at him and he let go of the letter and helped me out of the car.

Esme and Carlisle were already waiting on the porch for us “what happened” Esme questioned.

“We happened” I answered sadly. I walked right past them and into the living room glaring at Edward on the way who was looking like a kicked puppy.

“If you weren’t my brother I would tear you limb from limb” I snarled at him, how dare he play the victim.

“What did I do” he exclaimed

“What…you… did” I said slowly “WHAT YOU DID, OH I WILL TELL YOU WHAT YOU DID, YOU DESTROYED HER, WHAT EVER YOU TOLD HER WHEN WE LEFT KILLED HER” I exploded at him, I was so angry with him. I felt a wave of calm flow through me and I turned around and smiled at Jasper before walking over and sitting down on one of the few pieces of furniture left in the house.

“What happened at the house” Carlisle asked

“Charlie wasn’t to happy to see us, he opened the door took one look at us closed the door smashed up properly the whole living room before returning to the door and yelled at us” Jasper explained sadly

“What did he say” this Question was asked by Esme I looked up and relayed exactly what Charlie had said.

“I didn’t mean for any of this to happen” I heard Edward say quietly

“I don’t care what you meant to happen” I sneered at him “I’m going to read the letter she wrote to us out loud…is that ok with everyone” I asked, I receive a nod from everyone. I slowly took the letter out of my pocket and opened.

Dearest Cullen’s

If you are receiving this I am guessing you have either come back or Charlie has hunted you down and given you this. I am guessing that you know what I did. What you all drove me to do. I will not apologies for what I chose to be an appropriate way out, but the pain you caused me will never heal, even with the help of Jacob and the pack. Out of all the time I spent with you I really thought I meant more to you. I just have a final message to give to each of you.

Carlisle and Esme: I thought of you guys as my other parents, I would have loved to join your family but I am guessing that Edward had other plains. I love you both dearly and I wish everything could have been different.

Emmet: You were the big brother I never had, I want to thank you for always treating me like apart of the family, you never cared that I was a human, you always made me feel wanted, I thank you for that.

Rosalie: Thank you. You never gave me false hope, looking back now you are properly the only one who was ever honest with me; you always made your feelings of me obvious. I want to thank you for that, if the situation was different I am sure you and me could have be good friends. Thank you.

Jasper: Before I even start with you, I want to tell you that I forgive you for my birthday, it was not your fault, it was nobodies fault. What happened; happened? I know you and I never really got along but the time I spent with you in phoenix was great, I know it must of being hard for you to be near me when you wanted to bite me but I want to thank you for always being there when I needed you. You mean a lot to me. Thank you.

Alice: I don’t even know were to start, I thought you were my friend… my sister. How could you of left without saying goodbye. Even though Edward told me that he convinced you to stay away, I really thought you cared more about me then that. I’m glad everything ended the way it did because I got to see the real you. If you and your family came back because of a vision you had of me ending my life then I am ashamed of you, if you saw this happening, why didn’t you see any of the other times, seen the pain I suffered. Alice… I truly thought of you as my sister but now I see you as a lonely girl who didn’t know when to keep her nose out of it or even stick it in when it was needed.

Edward: I never thought I would love someone, it had always been drilled into my head that relationships are bad, well what can I say now, my mother was right. Love is a dangerous emotion, and when you are added into the equation it’s deadly. I loved you more then I care to admit, but what you said to me in the forest that day said everything. I am human and I am going to die a human death, you didn’t want me anymore so I don’t want to be me anymore, I was too human for you, a distraction… a distraction you didn’t need. What I am trying to say is that if you even still care about me in the smallest way, I am asking you NOT to go to the Volituri, you would only cause your family pain, pain that they don’t need. You made me promise not to do anything life threatening when you left, well you broke your promise to me so I broke the promise I made. I never thought riding a motorbike, cliff diving or almost drowning would have been fun but looking back now I can say that they were major high lights of my life and each time I rode that bike I thought of you, how I was breaking that promise over and over.

I wish everything could have been different but fate had other plans. The Bella you all knew died the day you left.

Goodbye. I love you

I looked up from the letter. No one was looking at me, everyone was looking at Edward, who was looking at the floor looking like he just died again. “When did she try” I heard him ask.

“I don’t know” I answered truthfully “the letter isn’t dated”

“When Charlie said that place, do you know what place he was talking about?”


“I’m going to go see Charlie” I heard Carlisle say. I jumped up and ran to Carlisle

“You can’t” I said “we have caused them enough pain”

“That place Alice, he said that place” he said sternly “think about it, where would you normally send a person who is severally depressed and suicidal”

I reeled back in shock; it never occurred to me that they had sent Bella to a Psychiatric hospital “No” i gasped

“I’m coming with you” I heard Edward say. I whirled around to look at him


“I can’t leave her to rot in that place Alice” his voice was pained

“You did that to her Edward, if you go near Charlie or Bella I will kill you myself, family be damned”

“Alice calm down” Carlisle said sternly

“NO” I yelled as I turned around to face Carlisle “what he did to Bella was despicable, telling her those things, telling her that she was too human, that she was a distraction and that he didn’t want her.”

“I know what he did was wrong but there is no need for violence”

“She blames me too Carlisle, re-read what she said about me” I cried “she is ashamed of me, I want her to want me as a sister again, someone she can trust…but Edward has ruined everything”

“Alice is right” Rosalie said, finding her voice “what Edward did was wrong, what I did to Bella was wrong, but if Edward even goes near her when we get her out of that place, I will hunt him down and hurt him”

I didn’t think I would ever hear Rosalie stick up for Bella and I don’t think I was the only one; everyone was looking at her in shock.

“Oh get over yourselves” she said annoyed “all of you stay here, I will go see Charlie”

No one, not even I stopped Rosalie when she got up and walked out the door. None of us moved, we all took seats around the room waiting for her to come back.

It was about an hour later that I smelt her in the distance and it only took a few moments for her enter the house. I don’t think I have ever seen her so mad and all her anger was directed at Edward.

“YOU” she growled “HOW COULD YOU”

It happened so fast that I could only watch as Rosalie stalked up to Edward pulled her hand back and slapped him, the sound echoed around the room.

“If you ever talk or see that girl before she is ready, no one in this family will be able to protect you from me” and with that Rosalie stalked back out the house.