After a rainy day in Forks, Edward, Emmet and Jasper go hunting. But their trip is disturbed when they find a dead body in the forest. The mystery behind her death is confusing and the mystery behind her life and everything it was a part of is overwhelming. But did the Cullens and Bella throw themselves into a mystery that will end in only more death? Who is this dead girl they found? And what will happen once they find out? ALTERNATE ENDING POSTED!!! Remember to REVIEW!
10. AUTHOR'S NOTE!!!!!
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Hey! I know you have all forgotten about this story, but for some reason I can't let it go.... Even though it creeped me out and was a little confusing, I keep on wondering about it. I'm plauged by questions like 'What if I actually made it a real mystery?' and 'What if I didn't reveal the dead girl's secret so quickly?'. I'm dissapointed by the turn out of this story, and I really want to see how a differnt plot would work out.
Getting to the point, do you think i should re-write this story and actually make it a mystery? I would be really fun, but of course, I don't want to write it if no one wants it! Please tell me what you think!
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