Edward's Birthday Suprise
It's Edward's 107th Birthday and Bella has a very special suprise planned for him. How will he handle it.
This was my first story. I wasn't happy with the way it turnd out, so I took it down. I decided to add some more to it and edited somethings. Now that I'm comfortable with the way it's turning out, I feel better about posting it. Enjoy = ) BPOV
4. Edward's Surprise
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Gently I slid my hand down to his chest and begin trace the perfect planes of it. His unnecessary breathing begin to pick up and his eyes were closed. I gently kissed his lips, and slowly slid my hand down to the waist of his jeans and reached for the button.
"Bella, love, what are you doing?" he asked as his eyes popped open and he grabbed my hand to stop me.
I looked at him with an embarrassed look on my face. Who the hell turns down a sexual act from there fiancée, I thought to myself. Am I that unattractive? He placed his hand gently to my cheek.
"All you do is do anything and everything I ask of you.” I said, almost in tears do to embarrassment, “You have no limits to what you will do to make me happy. Why wont you let me do something to make you happy for once?"
"Bella love, don't you see?” he replied, “You do make me happy. Just the knowledge that you love me and trust me enough to allow me to be alone with you is enough to make me happy.” He then begin to smile, “Besides, what kind of gentlemen would I be if I was to let you go through with your seduction, knowing you have had so much to drink?"
"I'm not drunk!" I snapped, although I was feeling the whole bottle of wine a little bit now. I pushed him away.
"Bella, don't be mad. When the time is right, after were married, I swear to you we will try."
“Just take me home.” I demanded as I stood up.
“Bella, please, understand, I want to do this with you, really I do. I want it more than anything else right now. But I want to do it the right way.” he said as he got to his feet.
I was silent as I packed up everything into the picnic basket.
“Please Bella, don’t be mad.” he said bending down for me to climb on to his back to make our way back to the car.
Once we were out of the woods he set me down and held the door open for me to get in. I was prepared to give him the silent treatment the whole way home.
“Bella, please talk to me.” he asked with desperation on his face as he started the car and headed home. I just glared at him, but then I looked at his face, his perfect beautiful face was in agony. Agony caused by me, his future wife.
“I’m sorry, it’s just I wanted to do something nice for you for your birthday.” I said.
“Bella, it was nice. We spent a whole day wrapped in one another’s loving embrace, what could be more perfect?” he asked.
“It’s just you never seem to want me the way I want you.”
“Bella, that’s absurd, how could you think I don’t want you in every possible way?”
“Because, your always so controlled and you never get caught in the moment, the way I do.”
“I’m always so controlled because I have to be, not because I want to be. It took everything in my power for me to stop you from gone through with your seduction back there. I wanted nothing more then for you to continue, but I couldn’t allow it. It’s for your own good.” he said. “As much as I want lose control I have to stay in control so that I don’t hurt you.”
“Edward, when are you gone to get over that fear?” I asked.
“Never, not until your changed and I know there’s no risk. Not only that I want our first time to be perfect.”
“Edward, what could have been more perfect then right there in our meadow,” I pointed out, “It’s where you took me on our first official date, it’s where you first showed me how truly inhumanly beautiful you are in the sun, it’s where we shared our first kiss, it’s where we first told one another of our true feelings. That place holds so much sentimental value to us, it’s where we had our first everything. Why shouldn’t it have also been the place where we made love for the first time?”
“Bella I swear to you once were married we will try.”
I gave him the silent treatment the rest of the way home.
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