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Broken Hearts

The much awaited sequel to Hidden Feelings. The Cullen's are recovering from Bella's death in their own way. But when Jasper goes searching for peace he discovers that love can conquer all.

lots of people said i needed to put a sequel so i did. I'm not sure what to do though but oh well. Enjoy!

11. eternal punishment

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"What do you mean, that's not Bella! It was her and you just let her fall to her death!"

"Edward" I said, cutting of his rant "How many thoughts could you hear"


"I can only assume that the people of this realm don't transmit their thoughts so that leave, me, Alice and Bella's thoughts"

"I can't hear Bella's thoughts" he said, confused.

"Exactly" his eyes widened.

"How did you work it out?" asked Lamia.

"Bella is the most selfless person I'd ever met. If Alice was in danger, she'd tell me to save Alice. Instead, she asked me to save herself. Bella wouldn't do that," I said.

"Where is the real Bella?" Edward growled.

"Bella died when she jumped. If you had resisted the girl you met, you wouldn't even be here," said Lamia.

I noticed that the figures around the edge of the pit were no longer just walking. They'd turned and were approaching us, the dogs snarling menacingly.

"You're never going to leave here Jasper. Your soul belongs to us now and you'll never see the mortal world again" Alice, Edward and I back away from the advancing troops.

"You are going to suffer, suffer so much that you wish you were dead but you never will" she said the words sadly, like a lament. Edward stopped.

"We can't move back any further," he said, sounding desperate. I glanced back. He was right. We were backed against the wall, with no way out. I looked around desperately for the door we had come through, but there was nothing. Just smooth, solid rock with no escapes. I heard Edward hit the rock wall, in an attempt to make it crumble but it was too hard, even for our strength. She shook her head sadly.

"Edward and Alice are going to suffer too Jasper. They will be tormented for eternity in front of you. But they will eventually stop. But we will never stop hurting you. For your crimes, you get an eternal punishment of torture," she said. Alice let out a sob.

It was all my fault. They were going to suffer, and it was my fault, my stupid decisions that had got us here. Lamia smiled, with a look of malice in her eyes. She took a step forward and stroked my face.

"Poor little Jasper" then she stepped backwards.

"There all yours" she said, before turning away. The crowds around us tightened their circle. The ones with dogs had to hold on tight, to the chains.

"What shall we do with them mistress?" hissed one, licking his lips.

"I think little Alice shall be with the hounds"

"But that won't last long mistress" said another, disgruntled.

"Yes it will," she said, smiling. Muttering ran through the crowd, in joy.

"And...the others?" asked one.

"Don't hurt him," she said, pointing at me.

"But why?"

"Let him watch his friends hurt first"

"For how long?"

"A few thousand years should do it" A thousand years? They couldn't, surely.

"Time runs differently here Jasper. One day here is a million years gone by in your world, depending on how I feel. So, a few thousand years here, watching your friends squirm will be good. Then we can have fun with you" four of the men grabbed hold of Alice and Edward. They struggled but the men's grips were strong as iron.

"Take them away," said Lamia. They dragged them away from me.

It was all my fault.