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Last Heart Beat

It is really hard to explain, I mean, to me, it came out really good, and I want you t read it, but I don't know how to explain it. Okay here is how you read my description, as if it were 2times more intense...because the description I will tel you is going to be lame, but the story isn't...! Please review, I can't function without reviews, I want ateast 5-8 reviews.... Edward made it to Bella in New Moon before Bella and Jacob were even friends, he just couldn't stay away. Then Victoia comes when they are visiting there meadow with 4 other vampires, strong one. They hold Edward down and make him watch Victoria kill Bella. He has to listen to her last heart beats...

Wow eh? that was intense?

1. Chapter 1

Rating 3.6/5   Word Count 515   Review this Chapter

A time to remember, and a time to understand.

“I LOVE YOU EDWARD CULLEN!” I screamed as I was being taken away by the Victoria. Edward was being held, and he was thrashing out of another vampires grip. I tried to thrash, but no such luck. I was weak, I was nothing.

“BELLA! NO! PLEASE ME NOT HER ME!” He thrashed and screamed and growled. The growls burrowed by whimpers, the whimpers burrowed by more growls. It was my time to leave this world, but what can I say, I had a good life, only because Edward was in it.

“Don’t Edward, it’s okay, I will be happy, don’t follow me.” I said. I took another blow to the head, I could feel the blood dripping down my face into my mouth and down my chin. I could hear Victoria laughing and I could only see blurs of what Edward use to be.

My life was ending, and I couldn’t be anything but happy.

“Edward, I love you.” I whispered before everything went black.


I tried to move out of the 3 vampires that were holding me down, I thrashed and growled but nothing worked. I could hear nothing but the screams of pain and about me coming from my angel.

“I LOVE YOU EDWARD CULLEN!” She yelled. Victoria was holding her right in front of me, and I knew what she was going to do.

“BELLA NO! PLEASE ME NOT HER ME!” I yelled at Victoria.

“Don’t Edward, it’s okay, I will be happy, don’t follow me.” She said, her voice full of pain. I saw Victoria raise her fist and hit Bella on the head, hard. Blood started to drip down from her face into her mouth and down her chin.

Victoria hit her again, she whimpered, “I love you.” Then fell to the ground. I could hear her heart slowing. It was almost to a stop now.

I couldn’t help but yell and thrash more. I couldn’t help it, I hit my head to the ground, crack the earth beneath me. Screaming “Bella!” over and over. I knew it wasn’t going to help, but Bella was dying and I was just siting here.

“I will hunt you down, and I will kill you in a very pain full way!” I screamed at Victoria, she laughed. I just started hitting my head on the ground again. This was the saddest day of my life and it wouldn’t end. I wished it to be a nightmare, to be nothing more than a dream, but vampires don’t sleep…

I kept listening to her heart beat. It was slowing yet, Victoria didn’t hit her hard enough, and she knew it. She wanted me to listen, to hear her heart beat. To have to suffer.

“I’m so sorry, please don’t die.” I whimpered, just lying on the ground. It was the end, the end of her life, the end of my life, and when they set me free, I would make sure, the end of my life…

Three last beats.

One, two, three…… then nothing, she was gone…

Author note: I really want reviews!