This is my version for the sequal to Breaking Dawn.Bella,the cullans,and Jacob,of course leave Forks to go to Dartmouth University.Bella's eyes are now golden and has a bathroom stacked with brown eye contacts for her collage year.This is Bellas first time with so many humans.But the question is are they all human? Bella meets unexpected guests.Who could it be?A fight breaks out between the cullens and the Volturi.Who will rise to the challenge?and who will fall?Read to know the answers.Bella also discovers new powers what are they? Last chapter is up!!!!Come on people please review. over 2000 reads and only 17 reviews. REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!
1. Chapter 1: I actually made it.
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I'm really here. I actually made it out of all the goodbyes and parties. Huh. The house looks like a mansion, its so beautiful. The kitchen is all marble. black and gray, of course. I wonder-
"Do you like it?" Edward asked "If you want we could get an apartment? It will be just you, me, and Renesmee." With a smirk on his face and a smile in his eyes.
"And me!" Jacob yelled across the gigantic living room, right across the kitchen. Which was pretty weird because the distance from the living room to the kitchen was 415 feet and 10 inches. Yeah, my perfect eyes could tell the exact measure. I was pretty sure i wouldn't be able to hear him, or at least him finding us. I mean come on this house is like a maze.
"Mommy! Where are you?" Renesmee called throughout the hall. Even though i knew exactly where she was, because her smell i could pick up anywhere.
"I’m over here hunny!" I yelled so she could hear me.
"Oh, there you are mommy. What should I wear the blue or pink dress?" Renesmee asked while putting both dresses on the side or her to see what dress matched.
"Hmm. I think you should choose the blue one. It matches your eyes." I suggested. After all, I would know. Blue always did match my chocolate eyes when I was human. Since Renesmee had the same colored eyes, of course blue would match, but yet again she would match with anything she looked like a supermodel or Greek Goddess. Where did the time go it has only been about a year in a half and already she looks like a 6 year old, but could talk like she was 50. Her perfect grammar, she would even criticize me.
"I like the blue one too, Nessie." Jacob said, with a smile on his face as he watched Renesmee.
I’m kind of irritated that Jacob came along, but hey with the whole imprinting thing. I knew i couldn't hurt Jacob like that, plus he would've followed anyway.
"What do you think daddy?" As she turned to Edward with a big, bright smile on her face.
"I agree with your mother. The blue does match your eyes." He said while looking at my with a smile. As if he were remembering how i looked in my blue blouse Alice gave me.
"Hunny, do want me to help you change or can you do it by yourself?" I asked, a little concerned if she could put it on, even though i knew she could handle it perfectly well by herself.
"It's okay mommy. I know how." Renesmee proclaimed as she left to go find the bathroom and change.
"Bella, you want to see our room?” Edward asked as he appeared right besides me and put his hand around my waist ,pulling me closer to him." Renesmee's room is connected to ours and I’m sure Alice wants to show you your closet." He said, trying to hide a smile.
"What!" I screamed." I thought I told Alice no more clothes."
"Well, I think she didn’t understand the "no" part." Jacob said, laughing. "I saw her this morning in the hall bringing bags and bags of designer clothes. Or Whatever kind of clothes they are. They just looked fancy."
"She didn't" I said, "Alice would never go behind my back."
"Bella!" Alice screamed from the staircase." I have a surprise for you" As she danced her way to me ad she usually does when she's excited. I held my breath.
"What is it Alice?" I said, keeping a straight look with no emotion.
"Come on Bella, don’t freak out." Rosalie said as she appeared right next to Alice. " Bella, me, Alice, and Esme have been working on it all day. Just come and look at it. Please for me?" She begged, as she tried to hide a smile on her face, but her eyes told the lie.
Over the months me and Rosalie have actually gotten pretty close. Weird, right? Actually I’ve gotten to know her and she's really cool. Jacob would think other wise.
"Hey Blondie, What did the blond say to the other blond when the other blond asked "How do you get to the other side of the river?"" Jacob asked with a smirk. "The other blonde said "you're already on the other side"."
"Ha-ha, very funny. I already know that one to." Rosalie said" Jacob are you getting weak on me?"
"You just wait, Blondie. I’m going to get you." Jacob said teasingly.
Rosalie turned to me and at the same time both her and Alice asked " Are you ready?"
"Lets just do it already" I sighed, as i caved ,wondering what Alice had did to my closet.
As we walked to the fourth floor which only had two suite sized bedrooms, two bathrooms, and two closest, obviously one was Renesmee's because the other closet was in a room overflowing with pink. As i looked into our bedroom, it was more beautiful than our small cottage. Our room had paintings of the beach on Esme Isle and the bed had the canopy just like the one in the cottage but just in a way bigger room, a 32" plasma screen TV, and then i stopped. Two Glass doors stood closed. Edward saw me stop ,took my hand and brought me with him while he opened the doors. As I came into the closest it was like a little mall. At least 15 people could fit up here and it was like the whole collection of top designer dresses, footwear, and jewelry where right there. It was beautiful, but then I saw what i hoped i saw a rack of jeans and long sleeve shirts. I was so relived, that I didn’t have to go and sneak out to buy me some real clothes.
"So do you like it?" Alice asked as she beamed her bright smile at me.
"It's beautiful Alice," I said while holding one of the legs of the denim jeans.” Thank you Esme, Rosalie, and Alice."
"No problem, sweetie." Esme said as she smiled her motherly smile.
"Its okay, i would've gotten you way more, but Edward said no." Rosalie said as she through an irritated glance at Edward.
"Bella!" Alice yelled at me. "How can you go on eye goggling a pair of denim jeans, when you've got half of the worlds top designs from the worlds top famous designers. You need to get your eyes check, those are just regular denim jeans, anyone can have them."
"Alice you know I like the simple things." I said” Plus, I do love and appreciate every single clothing in here..
"Bella if its the last thing I do, I will make you love designer clothes better than those jeans.” Alice said as she pointed a finger a me and waved it in front of her face.
"Lets see you try, plus you can always borrow." I said with a fake smile.
"Okay break it up girls." Esme said jokingly." We've got stuff to discuss."
As we all followed Esme, Emmet showed up next to Rosalie, Jasper walked to Alice, Jacob Picked up Renesmee, Carlisle appeared next to Esme, and of course me and Edward walked together. As we came to a stop at the dining room we all took our seats. I knew exactly what we were going to talk about it was about-
"So as you all know Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper will be attending Dartmouth University, am I clear?" Carlisle asked. We all nodded.” Okay we're all on the same page here."
"What is this about Carlisle?" Edward asked, even though he already probably knew the answer.
" Well Bella is still new and-"
"What does that have anything to do with it we all know she can handle it." Edward said frustrated, as we all had confused looks on our faces.
"As I was saying Bella is still new and may attract attention" Carlisle said as he looked at Edward. I looked at Edward and he just nodded at Carlisle and at that moment i knew they were hiding something from me.
"Okay since that is covered, Bella?" Carlisle asked
" I know your going to be alright."
" Yeah, i know I’ve got Edward with me." I said glancing at Edward who only smiled.
"Well, since that's all, I predict it going to be a long night." He said looking at Renesmee sleeping in Jacobs arms and looking at Edwards eyes.
When I looked outside I couldn't believe the sun was gone, already vanished beneath the water. As we all got up we all went different places. Rosalie and Emmet went to the garage, Alice and Jasper went to explore, and Carlisle and Esme went upstairs. Edward and I decided to put Renesmee in her bed, but of course Jacob insisted on that. So, i gave Renesmee to Jacob and made sure she wouldn't wake up . As Jacob disappeared into the stairs. Edward pulled me to his side.
"Want to go for a walk?" Edward asked.
"I would love to." I told him as he picked me up and carried me in his arms.
When we came outside I knew it wasn’t just a ordinary walk. He looked so tired, the black under his eyes so dark. The moon was shining so bright, crickets were singing, and my throat was burning. It was time to hunt.
- Chapter 1: I actually made it.
- Chapter 2: Dartmouth University
- Chapter 3: Human Company.
- Chapter 4: The Secret
- Chapter 5: Unexpected
- Chapter 6: New Powers
- Chapter 7: What else could happen
- Chapter 8: Near
- Chapter 9: Visions
- Chapter 10: Preparing
- Chapter 11: Killing Spree
- Chapter 12: Pain
- Chapter 13: Apologizing to Edward
- Chapter 14: Ending
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