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Beautiful Voice

AGE: TEEN/ EVERYONE (again not supposed to be for adults although adults may read this) What if Bella wasnt just a klutz but a girl with a voice. what if her long time dream was to become famous and share her voice with the world. What if Bella didnt handle the breakup with Edward like someone had died but a regular teenage breakup. What would happen?? What if bella met someone new? I mean shes got them popping up EVERYWHERE! Oh, but wait theres a TWIST!! You have to read to see what it is. Remember this is only just the beginning Bella/ Luis, Edward, Jacob, or ??????(Unknown or more like unknowns) who will be the lucky guy to fully win bellas heart. My wonderful banner made by eternitys_Charms!!New Chapter is HERE!!!!!!!!!!Thanks to all of those who have reviewed!! you push me to keep updating.Warning: There is a lot of drama


5. My date

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The day has finally come. Today was Friday and it was my date with Luis. Over the short time we’ve known each other we became fast friends. He was funny, kind, sweet, and just…. I have no clue. He’s way to good for words. I was starting to fall for him but I have no clue why. When I was with Edward I felt like I was floating, like I was an angle and he was my savior from heaven sent above. It felt like Edward was made for me and only me, but then he left. He dropped me and let me fall. I wasn’t hurt fully but my heart took a beating. I was deeply in love with him, but I was strong and I knew I could survive. I pushed myself to float once more but only just. Then Jacob came and pushed me up a little higher. I was reaching towards the sky, I was almost there but always seemed to be a little to far to reach it. Then Luis came and I saw myself floating, flying, spreading my wings to get higher, but still I was not there fully. As I started to know Luis better the heavens opened up a little at a time but they still locked me outside not letting me come in, yet.

I thoughts were interrupted when a truck started honking. I looked out the window and saw Luis. I ran downstairs fast and almost fell on my face but caught myself. I reached the door and opened it.

“Why hello there, beautiful.” he greeted taking my hand and kissing it. I blushed.

“Hello stranger.” I said back. Just then Charlie walked in the living room. Luis came inside and greeted Charlie.

“I’m Luis.” He said shaking my fathers hand.

“Hmmm.” was all my father said. Gosh couldn’t he be a little nicer. “Bella I want you home by 11.”

“No problem Mr. swan.” Luis said.

“Bye dad.” I said and walked out the door with Luis. He opened the door for me and I climbed in. After about an hour or so driving we made it to Port Angelas. He drove to the restaurant Edward and I went to. We went to the receptionist . Luis told him his name and they led us to out table.

“So how was your day?” he asked with his breath taking smile. I had to tell myself to breath, I kept forgetting.

“It was fine.” I said casually.

“So I hear your doing the talent show thing tomorrow.”


“Your going to win you know.” We talked about that until our food came. Then I asked him about what he does and why he moved to Forks. We talked about the most randomness things at the most randomness times. We laughed a lot. The sun had already set and It was getting late but I didn’t care, I wanted to stay with Luis. I was caught up in the conversation that I didn’t realize I was shivering until Luis took off his jacket and put it over me. I looked at my cellphone and it was already 9: 30.

“I think we should get going.” he said. As we left and got into his truck our conversation continued. We laughed louder because we didn’t have to keep quite. Then what felt only like 20 minutes we were pulling behind charlies cruiser. I looked at the dashboard clock and it said 10:50. Wow it was that late already. Luis opened my door and grabbed my hand helping me step down. He walked me to the door.

“I had a nice time Bella.” he said shyly

“Me too.” I said shyly back to him

“Do you think we could do this again maybe Sunday or tomorrow after you win the talent show.” he said truly content with himself.

“Yeah tomorrow.” I said excited that we would have another date.

“Goodnight Bella.”

“Goodnight Lu-.” just then his lips pressed against mine. His breath becoming the same as mine. He pulled me closer and I snuggled closer to him, not wanting to stop kissing his perfect lips. We pulled apart and we both had to catch our breaths.

“That was…” he said not finishing, lost in thought.

“Wonderful.” I said and smiled. I gave him one more goodnight kiss, said goodnight to him once more and went inside my house. Charlie was waiting up for me and looked amused when he saw me.

“Have a goodnight Bella?” he asked.

“Yeah, I’m a little tired dad I think I’m going to go upstairs and sleep.”

“Okay goodnight bells.” he said as I went up the stairs. I quickly dressed into my pajamas, brushed my teeth, and went to bed. Tonight was one of the best nights I ever had.