Moved On... Almost!
This story starts in ch.18 from New Moon. What if the phone didn't interrupet Jacob and Bella? what if they did kiss? What would happen next? would Edward ever come back? What happens when Bella and Jacob become more friends? Who will she choose? A new Ch is up!!! Ch. 24- What is the next step before Bella is changed? What is Bella's request?I HAVE EDITED THE FIRST FOURTEEN CH. SO IF YOU COME AND READ THEM, THEY ARE MUCH, MUCH BETTER!!! ESPECIALLY CH.4 - THEY ARE NOT PERFECT, BUT SO MUCH BETTER ! THANKS!
This takes place right after Bella thought Jacob had left. (In my version Jacob had tried to kiss Bella earlier, after she jumped off the cliff.)
15. A Visitor in Pain
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I woke up and the previous day flooded back to me. I felt cold arms around my waist. I turned around in them.
Just inches from my face, was Edward. “Good Morning.” He smiled at me and his breath blew in my face. His breath still had that same effect on me so it took me a minute to respond.
“Good Morning, how was your night.”
“Uneventful… you barely talked all night. I was quite disappointed.”
“Well I’m sorry. I’ll try to do better tonight.”
“You better or else.” He closed the distance between us. He softly placed his lips on mine and parted them slightly. His breath came out and hit me in the face. I felt faint.
“Would you like breakfast?”
“Hmm?” I lost my train of thought quickly.
“Bella…would you like me to make you breakfast?” he asked again. I could hear the worry in his voice.
“Sure… sorry, you still dazzle me.” He grin grew more pronounced.
“I hoped so.” He quickly swung his way out of the bed and over me. He proceeded to sling me over his back, gently, ignoring the fact that I could walk. He walked his way down the stairs, at somewhat vampire speed.
He sat me down in the kitchen chair and started to make me pancakes. While they cooked, the smell wafted throughout the house. It smelled delicious.
“Here Mrs. Swan, a secret family recipe.” He sat the three pancakes down in front of me and sat across from me. He watched as I ate, quickly demolished them. They were divine.
“Wow… Edward, I didn’t know you could cook. They were great.”
“Thank you. It was one of my favorite foods as a teen. My mother always made them for me. Some how that memory has stuck with me, when others haven’t.”
I was about to respond when there was a loud knock on the door. It sounded as if they would have knocked any louder they would have broke down the door.
“werewolves.” I heard Edward murmured under his breath.
“What does Jake want, NOW?”
“Not good.” He walked extremely fast to the door, but still at human speed.
What did he mean ‘not good’? What happened? What if…? Oh no! I ran to the door also, following behind Edward.
He opened the door to a screaming Jake. He was being carried by Sam. Both of there shirts were extremely blooding. Sam was covered in what looked like Jake’s blood.
Jake was screaming. His shirt was bloody especially around the neck. I realized that it was oozing blood and had to bite marks in it. I felt a little faint; the blood was making me queasy.
“OH NO Jake!” I ran to him but was pulled back by Edward. At that moment his cell phone rang, it flashed to his ear, before it even finished it first ring. He spoke swiftly and quietly. I didn’t understand anything expect ‘he’s here’. I wondered if Alice had a vision or something. But she couldn’t see werewolves.
He quickly placed the phone back in his pocket. It happened in a flash.
I was feeling queasier by the second, but I couldn’t stop staring at all the blood. Edward noticed the look on my face.
“Bella don’t you dare pass out on me now!” he ordered and I tried to pretend it was all just paint. I nodded and covered my nose.
“What the hell happened?”
“Victoria bit him! We were right behind him, but not quick enough. She’s dead now. We can’t have him on our land or near us. Can you take care of him?”
“He’s your friend; you can’t just dump him here, with us.”
“Unfortunately we have to. He is now our enemy. Please help him.” He set him down and ran back down the driveway.
“Edward… what now?”
“My family is coming. Looks like we have a new member.”
“AHHH! BELLA PLEASE HELP! MAKE THE FIRE STOP!” Jake yelled. Edward picked him up took him inside.
- The phone call
- The Aftermath
- Picnic on the Beach
- I Love You, Bella
- No Mike!!!
- Ow!! There is a Wall There!
- Barbie Doll To Be
- Dance With Me
- Coming Back To You
- My Angel
- He's Back
- Being Happy
- Catching Me
- A Visitor in Pain
- Author's note!
- Jacob's POV of CH.13
- Werewolf to Vampire
- Jacob the Vampire
- They're Coming
- Be Human for the Non-Humans
- Begging, Pleeding, and Voting
- The Proposal
- Sneak Preview for the upcoming sequel
- Not Giving Up For the Ones You Love
- The Truth
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- 10 Jul 07
- 01 Dec 07
- In Progress