Take on: Twilight Saga...Negative Exposure
If you are looking for a Twilight story that has Bella being twin sisters with Alice after running away from their abusive father to become a starlet in L.A where she meets Lawyer Edward Cullen...this isn't that story. This is a continuation of Breaking Dawn with some tweaks here and there. It's exciting, suspenseful, and romantic. Here's my hook, Bella gave birth to twins! Welcome to the world Renesmee and Masen!!!The story takes place mere hours after the confrontation with the Volturi in Breaking Dawn. Watch the lives of all your favorite characters, as I try to include as much of both the vampires and he shape shifters as possible. I really really hope you guys enjoy the story and give it a chance. Reviews good or bad always welcome! Now watch and Masen and Renesmee enjoy and endure their childhood and blossom into young vampire human hybrid adults! Oh...and before I get sued. SM owns the Twilight saga and all of her original characters. Rated adult for a reason.
All normal pairings, and I have paired up who was left mateless at the end of Breaking Dawn. I really hope you like it. All of the characters are in this story I just didn't know if I should tag all of them.
11. Chapter 11 Over and Done
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Chapter 11 10-16-11
December crept along, luckily only bringing two snowstorms, neither of which lasted more than 6 hours. With vampires who didn’t sleep, and one in particular who had elemental control, Benjamin had the snow cleared from the work space. J. Jenks helped the Cullens with the documentation declaring the outskirts of forks a sanctuary for a nearly extinct insect species.
Charlie had already agreed, and done, his part in petitioning the initiation of the process, and halfway through construction they built the wall. It was nothing threatening, but it served its purpose. Standing at 8ft tall, starting at Charlie’s house engulfing it, and providing the first black wrought iron gate. It expanded past the forest, and the Reservation and beaches, past Carlisle’s new hospital which he was providing services to the people on the Reservation, past the trail leading to The Meadow, past The Cottage, The Field, The new Housing Development, and the Cullens, and the forest that went beyond that. It was made of glass that reflected the scenery in front of it. Dozens of 1ft pillars were spaced out every 10 feet or so. On each pillar sat a vase containing flowers or a statue of some novelty. No doubt Alice had a say in the design of the wall.
Everything was even more spectacular behind the wall once they were finished with it. The Vampire Housing Development was…modern to say the least. The foundation was flat and concrete, with a metallic finishing covering it, even the main porch steps, and both the side entrance, and back entrance steps. The structure that sat atop this flat foundation is what caught you’re attention. It was an enormous sphere, the exterior made entirely out of a lightly blue tinted see-through glass. In each apartment of the building there was a button panel located near the main door, giving it’s inhabitant to control when and if they wanted the mirror’s see-through or of they wanted the mirrors to give of a reflection from the outside. This was Charlie’s idea.
Alice. Esme, Rosalie, Emily, and Sue all agreed to make a point to make each room unique. In total there were six floors. At the top and bottom of the dome, where the space was the smallest, there were no bedrooms. Instead, the top floor was used as the generator, and supply room, holding anything that may be needed to repair plumbing and electricity. The bottom floor was used as a general gathering area for all the tenants, to the far right was what looked like small kitchen, and dining area, stocked with mostly non-perishables. Continuing left was a play area for children as there were adolescent humans on the reservation ranging from 2-13, and there was entertainment provided for each age range. In the middle was the main staircase which led to every floor above.
To the left of the stairs was a general bathroom area, and 4 sets of elevators, to accommodate the possibility of heavy human traffic flow. The entire rest of the left wing of the bottom floor was dedicated to comfort. There were chairs and couches, tables with lamps, and a big screen TV on a mantel.
It was quite homey, and would have been perfect for any family looking for a place to rent. If you were to follow the stairs you would find what looked like four identical floors, with 12 doors on each floor. The first two floors had two bedroom apartments, with one bathroom, a living, kitchen, and eating area, and a room with a library and computer. Each room however was designed completely uniquely, with different furniture, color schemes, and design of the room. No two rooms were alike. On the 3rd and 4th floors the only difference was there were only one bedroom apartments, designated obviously for the vampires. Still very spacious and beautifully designed, but a 2nd bedroom wasn’t necessary for those without children. Overall a wonderful job was done designing the Housing Addition, and luckily there were no problems to build it.
The storms didn’t come until it was time to renovate the Reservation, and build the wall. Obstacles aside the Reservation looked marvelous when it was done. The Cullens truly outdid themselves in an effort to repay the tribe. A beautiful bridge was built as homage to the two clans coming together, where the treaty line was once drawn at the river. Across the bridge you could see First Beach, only now, only a few steps as you walk onto the beach, there was a fairly large, up-scale shack looking establishment. It had two floors and a wraparound porch, mocking a lifeguard stand.
This was going to be Carlisle’s new hospital, exclusively designated to the people who lived in the community. He would still work at the hospital for now, but he never slept so he could cut back a little there, and provide for the Reservation. In the middle of the Beach there was new meeting place for the Council to attend. It mostly looked like a gazebo, as it did not have walls, only a roof, and pillars holding it up. There were two distinctive seating area’s surrounding a small bonfire, One raised higher than the other, and also making a smaller circle than what the rest of the seats made. Obviously the seats that were raised were designated for council member, and the other seats, for guests.
Moving past first beach there was not one apartment complex. Edward had made it quite clear he wanted each individual family to have their own home. Each surname on the lot had a house built for them, based on their families’ size, and Alice’s questionnaire as to which design’s they preferred. It was an amazingly colorful sight, some houses kept their laid back persona; others were very modern and up to date. Past the houses were more buildings each serving their own purpose, one small grocery store, that Charlie himself offered to drive the truck in once every two weeks to stock the store. Perishable items could be grown in the newly established gardens, but until first harvest would be ready he agreed to do this task once a week. There was also a store for odd n end things that would be needed on a day to day use, which you didn’t need to eat. The school had been established past these stores, fully equipped with an amazing playground.
There was also a coffee/sandwich shop there too, Sue’s idea. And the final building was that of a Rec center. A place for youth of all ages to come and study, play, and read. After all the efforts made upon everyone it was finally done. Although let’s not forget the drama that inevitably ensued when every member of the Reservation, and the new vampires had moved into the house. Tensions definitely were high. The humans were afraid of the vampires, even though they vowed not to hurt a single one of them. There was a particular problem that occurred with Leah.
The truths about Embry and Leah quickly became known. Their pack was the first to know. Jared had later caught them while he was walking through the woods with Kim. They had simply been holding hands, whereas Leah was atop Embry in a secluded field. They had figured they were far enough away, but evidently they had been mistaken. Their affair was short lived, it only lasted until the last day of construction.
Leah and Embry went MIA for the entire time the Housing Addition was being built. Only their pack knows the intricate details of what happened during those three days, and they kept it to themselves. They returned when it was time to build on the Reservation, and decided to sleep on the beach at night, neither one of them stayed at the Housing Addition. They were inseparable for that week and a half, and on the last day, when Leah and Embry had finally set foot on Cullen property to help move everybody back home.
Embry Seth and Leah went to the 2nd floor where Sue and Seth were staying. Seth called out to somebody and asked for a race up the stairs so they had the elevators to themselves. Leah had hit the “doors open” button in between one and two. She wrapped around Embry who graciously helped hold her in place, she put her hand down his pants, teasing him.
“Not now Leah” He protested, with a smile.
He removed her hand and kissed it.
“When we are all settled in tonight we’ll go out okay?”
“Promise?” she asked kissing his neck.
“Yes.” He laughed, and kissed her passionately.
They parted and Embry hit “doors close” They made their way out of the elevator, and before they ever turned to head towards the room that’s when it happened. Leah froze in place her grip tightening on Embry’s hand, he looked at her confused.
“Leah, what’s up?” This got the attention at the two at the top of the stairs. Seth began to walk towards his sister, concerned, as did his racee.
“What’s the matter sis?”
But Leah couldn’t answer him; her body had muted her, as she went through a life altering transformation. She felt as if she had been disconnected from the universe, free-floating and lost, she didn’t like the feeling one bit. Suddenly, as the boy began to walk towards her, she suddenly reappeared to this plane. Safe, Secure, Devotion, Protection,Love.
All of these things suddenly connected Leah to this boy like a steel cable, and there was no turning back. She relaxed her grip on Embry’s hand upon her return into her body. Once realizing that she no longer had any desire to hold his harm she dropped it, still staring at the boy. Unfortunately for Leah he knew very little of the pack’s trait of imprinting so he had no idea what it looked like. He stared at her with confusion on his face, while she looked at him longingly.
Leah couldn’t believe it, she had seen him before, she was trying to remember how many times she had now. She had never locked eyes with him before though, until that moment on the staircase, which she would never forget.
I’m hoping that if I leave you guys with a cliffy, maybe that would spark some reviews.
- Chapter 1 Grey Dawns and Early Sunsets
- Chapter 2 Good Morning Daddy
- Chapter 3 The Vampire Housing Development
- Chapter 4 Obsession Session
- Chapter 5 Confession Obsession
- Chapter 6 Planning the Base
- Chapter 7 Resurrecting the Reservation
- Chapter 8 The Wolves Will Play
- Chapter 9 Celebration, Creation, and Forgiveness
- Chapter 10 Convictions Decisions Solutions
- Chapter 11 Over and Done
- Chap 12 One Year One Week
- Chap 13 Anahi Maysun and Serena
- Chap 14 Jane's Addiction
- Chap 15 The Age of Conception
- Chap 16 Splitting Up
- Chap 17 MIA
- Chap 18 Doubling the Pack
- Chap 19 Returning with Presents
- Chap 20 Massacre
- Chap 21 Carnage
- Chap 22 Finale
- Chap 23 What's Next?
- Chap 24 Moving On
- Chap 25 Newborns
- Chap 26 Time to Kill
- Chap 27 Through the Eyes of Children
- Chap 28 Finding Proper Footing
- Chap 29 Renesmee's Real World
- Chap 30 Masen's Real World
- Chap 31 Leah's Lament
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- 12 Feb 13
- 28 Jan 15
- In Progress