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Reviewer: leo22cuervo (Signed) · Date: 01 Jul 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like it very much, all the rumors of a smalltown (I would know...)

I especially like the "I'm going to bed...!  "To sleep!" hahahaha

Now I'm reading the others stories. 

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: 21 May 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

ha ha finally Lauren gets what she deserves

Reviewer: Kit_Kat_Cullen_XOXO (Signed) · Date: 07 May 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 7

Please update! Or is this the end?

tear,tear! 



Author's Response: This is the end -- but you can sort of "follow" what happens in "August 13th," "September 13th" and "January 14th" ...

Reviewer: Kit_Kat_Cullen_XOXO (Signed) · Date: 07 May 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great job. It is pretty different from the book with the Renee part In Breaking Dawn, Renee took it better then Charlie and was excited and proud and understood why Bella was getting married.  

I like it!

Great Job!

xoxo-Katrina

 

 

Reviewer: Teacher (Signed) · Date: 27 Jan 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 7

Nicely done!!!

Reviewer: Teacher (Signed) · Date: 27 Jan 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

I absolutely loved this chapter!  I never ever have like Lauren....I wonder what Edward thought of all this!!!  Way to go Bella!

Reviewer: Teacher (Signed) · Date: 27 Jan 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 4

Good Bella for teasing him!

Reviewer: Teacher (Signed) · Date: 27 Jan 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 2

Ha ha....Nicely done!  i like Bella's exageration.

Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: 16 Nov 2008 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

What a beautiful, perfect ending...  but I expected no different! Once again, I am floored by your talent as a writer. This story had such a simple conflict and plot, and yet you bring so much imagery and humanity to it. Wonderful, as always! I can't wait for what you write next!

Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: 16 Nov 2008 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 5

Well that was enjoyable. It's so rare that Bella gets to hurt the people who've wronged her herself. I made this really weird giggling sound when I read that Bella had punched Lauren in the face. Revenge is sweet. Great chapter. :)

Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: 16 Nov 2008 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Your way with words never ceases to amaze me. I was so sure I'd read all of your work on this site... apparently not! Anyway, this was a terrific first chapter. Onto the next! :)

Reviewer: Collective Souls (Signed) · Date: 13 Nov 2008 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 7

I love your story, I think this is your best one yet! The characters were spot on and l liked Bella's standing up for herself by punching Lauren. You are an amazing writer who understands the complex relationships between the Twilight Saga's characters, and are able to manipulate them to do whatever you want, while keeping them true to themselves. I would really like it if you could continue Rumors! :)

 Lindsay



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much!

I actually kind of consider "Rumors" as an unofficial prequel to "August 13th" and its sequels ("September 13th" and "January 14th.") So those stories sort of continue this one ...

Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: 04 Oct 2008 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 6

You captured Jacob so well with his reaction to being told Bella just got done punching the girl who had started the rumor she was pregnant.  That was so Jacob.  I loved it.  Great work

Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: 04 Oct 2008 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh my.  What's going to happen next.  I am loving this.  You write such awesome stories.  I just loved how Bella started off with asking Lauren if she was fat and then punched her in the mouth. So awesome.

Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: 04 Oct 2008 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 3

Awesome written story.  This ended so cute.  Loved it.

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: 04 Sep 2008 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 7

This was a great story.  Keep up the great writing, I can't wait to read more of your work,

jace

Reviewer: YouAreNotLeavingMe (Signed) · Date: 29 Jul 2008 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 5

I just love that you made her punch Lauren! It was super awesomelishious!

Reviewer: Bella and Edward (Signed) · Date: 13 Jun 2008 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love your story Rumors! It is sooooo life like and you fit the caractors so well. When I read this story I felt the same excitment when reading Meyer's books. Please keep writing! you are my favorite author on twilight fan fic and keep up the amazing work!

~bella 



Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story so much. I am still writing -- I hope to have a couple new stories posted within the next few weeks, before the release of Breaking Dawn.

Reviewer: stardremer (Signed) · Date: 05 Jun 2008 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 7

I love the story!!!! It's insanely cute!!!! I love how Lauren FINALLY got what she deserved! We all hate her sooooooo much...Edward should eat her.....that would be interesting to read.....Lol! I think I've read all your stories now, and I love them all! Please write more!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like this story -- and the others -- so much. I am working on a couple new stories. I hope to have them posted *before* Breaking Dawn is released.

Reviewer: Queen Isis (Signed) · Date: 28 Mar 2008 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

aww!! i loved it!!! its going to my favorites :)

Author's Response: Awesome, thanks!

Reviewer: Queen Isis (Signed) · Date: 28 Mar 2008 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

HA HA... she dazzled him :D

Reviewer: Queen Isis (Signed) · Date: 28 Mar 2008 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

to bed... LOL omg :D

Reviewer: Iris (Signed) · Date: 25 Mar 2008 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

Okay, I read this a really really really long time ago before I even had an account (thus explaining why I hadn't reviewed it)

This was so funny! I really love the stories that don't really have a big plot, they're just an exploration of littler things. (you know, no bloodthirsty vampires, no rabid werewolves, no witches...) This was a really sweet and funny story, very in character, and with just enough fluff! (and I loved Bella punching Lauren!!)



Author's Response:

Ah, well thanks for reviewing now that you have an account!

It's true, this story doesn't really have much of a plot ... but I had this mental image of Mike Newton spotting Bella's ring before she announced the engagement and having a small freak-out. And it was based on that scene alone that I wrote this story. The idea of punching Lauren came later, but was extremely gratifying to write! ;)

Anyway, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story -- fluff and all. It was lots of fun to write.

Reviewer: thelovelymara (Signed) · Date: 18 Mar 2008 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 5

OMFG!!! BAHHAHAHAHAHAH THAT WAS FREAKIN HILARIOUS!!! OMMAHHHHGAHHH PROPS TIMES 100000000 for YOU!! OMFGthe punch was BEAUtIFUL!!1 AHHHHH<3

Reviewer: Ginavera (Signed) · Date: 17 Mar 2008 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 7

Yay!!! really super cute story! I'm offically adding you to my fav. authors list!

Author's Response: Awesome -- thanks!!!

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