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Reviews For It Was A Dark And Stormy Night...(Twilight Archives Contest One-shot)

Reviewer: Scene Queen (Signed) · Date: 10 Aug 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

I liked it, erm, it's about Bella and Edward in New Moon right?

Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and yes it is about Bella and Edward in New Moon. ANd also some of that is how I felt when well my boyfriend broke up with me. He said he loved me and all that. Thank you!!:)

Reviewer: Oh_ Mike How will I go on (Signed) · Date: 06 Aug 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Why would anyone send you haters!!! Its really good! Sad but good. And very emotional.
i liked the repetition of the dark and stormy night- it really helped to set the atmostphere> Such a sad ending!
It was also so brilliantly unique- using 'you' to engage the reader more and it just genrally set the tone really well.
Well done. Brilliant
Oh_Mike :D

Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That makes me feel really good about it! I don't want to lose the challenge but I wish that only five people entered then nobody would feel bad if they didn't win anything. Thank you! I never thought it was that good. When my mom read it she was like "hm." And that's it. Thank you again!!

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