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Forlorn and Forgotten
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4/5 |
35 |
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this my first story on here so criticism is expected...but not overly harsh please...but what if edward left again as bella had expected? what would they do?
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Stolen
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7 |
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What type of feelings would you harbor against the one who changed you...Regret, animosity, love?
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Constant Reminder
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5/5 |
5 |
1 |
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This one is about Bella after Edward leaves and the agony of ths departure and all the things she detests about her self that she feels aided in his decision!
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Edwards Nightly Prayer
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10 |
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i tweaked an old bedtime prayer to suit edward and his hopes and worries of Bella's mortality...ENJOY
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Torn Decisions
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this one can be taken many ways...it is very metaphorical..so you decide what you wish it to be about...but here is the scoop...bella is dealing with decisions...decisions that affect every aspect of her being...what factors will sway her to choose the night, or the sun remember the sun is constant but the moon changes constantly and its consistency takes longer to recognize IT IS FIXED...oops on the one/on thing my bad thanks go to the spelling nazis god i love you all!!! :)
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A CYCLE OF PHASES
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Everyone |
4.5/5 |
16 |
1 |
Yes |
39 |
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this one is about edward, and bella, and their struggles and renewed faithfulness in their ability to make each other happy...but since its poetry...my oppinion on what its about doesn't matter...its how it affects you...so REVIEW AFTER READING SO I KNOW THE IMPRESSION I"M LEAVING...that is all :)
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True Colors
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4/5 |
8 |
1 |
Yes |
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this one can be taken many ways again...METAPHORICAL but i like to think of this from Jasper Perspective..but thats just me
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Music of Sorrow and Love
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4.5/5 |
9 |
1 |
Yes |
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this is a piano inspired poem and i hope it doesn't suck bad Ok so I am a Little disappointed in the reveiws section of this site...I review religiously...the least people could do was the same...i know...but even a good is better than Jack Squatt ya know! I really like this poem and i hope others do as well...so one review...well that bites...literally...lol...so chop chop and start reviewing my stuff people or i won't put out any more...yea...thats a threat!!!
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Reciprocal
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Everyone |
4.5/5 |
83 |
4 |
No |
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What would the story be like...if the roles of bella and edward were reversed! Ok Ok I LOVE YOU ALL WHO REVEIWED SO EXPEDIENTLY AND CONTINUOUSLY YOU ARE JUST A-GIGGLE-FIT-BUNCH-OF-FUNSICLES!!!!! PROPS TO YOU, and here is your reward! Chapter 4 is posted thanks guys for being patient!
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Dark Symbols
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5/5 |
3 |
1 |
Yes |
19 |
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short poem about symbolism that refers to characters in the books
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Circulation
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5/5 |
4 |
1 |
Yes |
17 |
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poetry about edwards restraint and how much it costs him
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Windows and Mirrors
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5/5 |
3 |
1 |
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Edward discussing bellas reactions and her meaning to him
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Edward's Struggle
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3 |
1 |
Yes |
13 |
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exactly what the title suggests
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Dimming
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2 |
1 |
Yes |
62 |
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Bella's comparison and her reasoning with edward i find it truthful and refreshing
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Patience
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2 |
1 |
Yes |
36 |
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it is a virtue that i lack..REVIEW AND LET ME KNOW IF YOU FIND THIS TRUTHFUL AND RELAVANT
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Each Other
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5/5 |
3 |
1 |
Yes |
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Bella thinking of what edward means to her and what she would give up for him...even if he refuses to see the "light"
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If I May
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6 |
1 |
Yes |
32 |
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Edwards longing for bella deepens as she constantly needs him And he only hopes she'll keep needing him so he has a purpose
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simpering
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3.5/5 |
2 |
1 |
Yes |
32 |
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A poem about bella's unrequitted attraction
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The Choices I make...
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5/5 |
3 |
1 |
Yes |
112 |
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Bella must choose betwixt the two of her lovers...jake or edward...using symbolism and witty prose i show you this decision and my take on her "choice" ENJOY
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This and That
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Everyone |
0/5 |
0 |
1 |
Yes |
38 |
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Short-ish poem about mounting frustration
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Flighty
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Everyone |
0/5 |
0 |
1 |
No |
53 |
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Longer poem with more substance and angst than prior poems...
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To Those Who Would See
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0/5 |
1 |
1 |
Yes |
86 |
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a poem of hiding inner turmoil with outward jubilance
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Hope Ridden
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0/5 |
2 |
1 |
Yes |
72 |
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Poem about hopes...and how they uplift and destroy simultaneously
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Sunkissed and Missed
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Everyone |
4.5/5 |
3 |
1 |
Yes |
80 |
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poem once again, angsty and glorious...happy even
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The End
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Everyone |
0/5 |
2 |
1 |
Yes |
100 |
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a brief poem portraying the grief and pain that encompasses the change as well as the death of their human life.
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Aimless
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0 |
1 |
Yes |
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the characters of the series express an aimlessness with which they perpetrate their actions that reflects a humanity thought to be lost to them
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